Ellen's Tips
  • On Writing
  • As a writer your job is to make choices and WRITE THEM DOWN!

    Until you write them down you’re thinking, not writing. You become a writer when you make the trip from your head to the page. It’s a short trip, but a scary one.

    You can’t try to make the trip, you leap! When you leap, you are writing!

    Wasn't that fun? Now you can look back and read it. Because the truth about writing is that while it's usually not as bad as you feared, it also usually needs a rewrite. But don’t rewrite while you’re leaping – you'll fall.

  • Red Flag
  • TRIES – Here's a trick that will strengthen your writing without even "trying".

    Look over your outline or action descriptions; do you have a character "trying" to do things? For Example: Jen tries to get in the apartment. DO THIS: Take out the word "tries" and go for it – have your character DO whatever it is you described her as "trying" to do. For Example: Jen sticks the key in the lock and it breaks off in her hand. Even a simple, Jen turns the doorknob, it’s locked, is better. And now that she's done something, you can go on and write the next thing your character does. She kicks the door and screams obscenities. She slides down the door in a heap on the floor and cries.

    Here's another example. Say you wrote: Brad tries to get money from his mom. Take out "tries" and write what he does: Brad offers to clean the bathroom for $20. Or, if he's more rebellious: Brad steals $20 from his mom's purse. You see? What your character does can be photographed, and we, the audience/reader can see it too. What he "tries to do" is vague – there's no image of him in action yet, it can't be photographed. Cut "tries" and have him do it.

    BONUS: STARTS – Use the same trick – take "starts" out of your descriptions. Your character doesn't 'start' cooking, he throws bacon on the grill; she doesn’t 'start' up the stairs, she trudges to the first landing and collapses. Of course, there are exceptions – a character can 'start' the car, as in The Godfather, when the beautiful Apollonia, Michael's (Al Pacino) sweetheart in Sicily, turns the key in the ignition and it blows up, killing her. If you've got something that full of action and story consequence, okay – otherwise, don't 'start' the action, DO the action.

    If you use these tricks in your outline I guarantee when you write the scene with dialogue and action it will be more effective for a visual medium and a more exciting read for your reader.

    QUIRKY – Have you described a character(s) as "quirky"? Okay, now you need to go back, and go on. Quirky is shorthand; a placeholder. What is it that makes your character "quirky?" How is she quirky? What does she do that would make someone think she’s quirky? Shorthand is okay for someone else to evaluate your character, but your job as the writer is to create the "quirkiness." To do that, you define it. That’s creating a character. And that, my dear sweet creative soul, is you being a writer.

  • Quote
  • "...when you're writing a television series. You have to write when you're not writing well. I wrote 88 episodes of The West Wing. One of them is going to be your 88th best. And I'm not good enough for my 88th best to be very good." Aaron Sorkin

  • What's Up in the Kitchen
  • This month’s project: Cheesecake

    I make a pumpkin cheesecake every Thanksgiving (which I have to say, is pretty great) and a friend asked if I’d make it for the dessert table at his wedding – flattery will get you everywhere. So I said “For your wedding?! Sure, I’d be honored.” If you’d like to download the whole story and the recipe, click here.

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    Wow! Ellen and her book are discussed on Tom Cruise's website! Scroll down to the "Books & Online Texts" section for a very nice description of Ellen's book, The TV Writers Workbook. Thanks, Tom!

    News About Ellen's Clients

    Peter Tenenbaum says Thanks!

    • First thing I noticed was that when I got to the script writing part it went really fast because of all the work and revision I'd done in the steps leading up to it. Second thing I noticed was that the quality of the writing was a lot better. One of the two scripts I wrote with your approach is probably the best thing I've ever written. The other is much better than I expected it to be. So your approach has really worked for me and improved my writing. Thanks!

    Tracy Dawson reports:

    • ELLEN! I have been staffed!! A new TBS show: YOUR FAMILY OR MINE with creator/showrunner Greg Malins. I'm eternally grateful for you and to you. I feel like I've finally got my foot in the door of being a working TV writer here in the USA [Tracy's Canadian]... it's all very exciting and thrilling and I love it so much... thank you thank you thank you for EVERYTHING

    And Tracy recommends:

    • Ellen's book, The TV Writer's Workbook, changed my life. It gave me the foundation for everything. I was lucky enough to then attend one of her workshops, which I cannot recommend enough. I can honestly say a large part of where I am today (now staffed on TV shows!) is because of Ellen and her genius for imparting her wisdom.

    Enuka Ocama's "Mad Men" spec got the attention of the Exec. Producers of Rookie Blue. Enuka wrote to me to say...

    • I am in the midst of writing an episode of Rookie Blue. I've spent the last two weeks in the writers room, breaking the story with them, and I'm exhausted and exhilarated at the same time! It's been a dream come true. I wanted to thank you really, for encouraging me to be tenacious. It paid off. I now have a one-hour spec of Mad Men and will have a produced one-hour Rookie Blue script under my belt to boot! So exciting.

    Harvey Solomon took my class and then did four consulting sessions with me. He's got exciting news and wrote to tell me...

    • My pilot, Shadow War, recently received an 8 evaluation from the Black List! They had some very complimentary things to say, most especially this: "Right off the bat, this script is exciting in both premise and execution, pulling the reader along with unstoppable force in each scene. Throughout the script is a sense of confidence and style reminiscent of the Mad Men pilot, a show that knows exactly what it wants to be... a show like this seems like a slam-dunk for any basic cable network."
      There is no way I could have gotten this type of feedback without your input and expertise. I just wanted to say thank you once again.

    Adam Balsam enjoys all the perks of being a produced screenwriter, one of which is telling me about his new movie! He wrote the screenplay for the animated film Legends of Oz: Dorothy's Return. The cast includes the voices of Lea Michele, Martin Short, Dan Aykroyd, Kelsey Grammer, and Jim Belushi.

    "I'm really surprised that more writers don't use a coach to help them perfect their craft. Star athletes like Kobe Bryant use personal coaches all the time to be the best at their game. Ellen's expertise as a writing coach provided me with thorough and insightful feedback on a recent TV Pilot. She's involved throughout the process - guiding and coaching all the way. Ellen is invaluable!"

    Chandus Jackson - screenwriter

    "Ellen is a brilliant teacher. Every time I meet with her, I'm amazed by her ability to pinpoint what I need to work on to take my pilot to the next level. Her insights and feedback make me excited to get back to work. Honestly, it's hard for me to contain my enthusiasm for her work into just a few sentences - but if you take her workshop or consult with her, you'll know exactly what I mean!"

    Wendy Weiner, currently writing a TV movie for ABC Family

    Ellen with Carl Reiner

    Photo by Elaine Siegel
    February 2012 - Ellen, thrilled to appear on a panel with her hero, the legendary Carl Reiner

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    Ellen's got a few things to say, and
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    "Ask the Expert" at Storylink.com
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    Ellen's article on mediabistro.com
    What Not To Do in the TV Writer's Room