TV PILOT CONSULTATION
Come early in your process!
It's more cost effective and more productive to work with me BEFORE you write the first draft. I'm your coach, not your buyer. It's not supposed to be "ready."
My development approach applies to both one hour and half hour pilots (yes, short video projects too), and within that process I tailor the work to the individual writer and the particular needs of the specific project.
I offer guidelines and tools for the creative development of your ideas within television series requirements. What you get is a path to the realization of your project with support and reassuring markers along the way.
BEST BUY: The most cost effective and quickest way
to develop your series pilot
PILOT DEVELOPMENT CONSULTATION PACKAGE
Concentrated and focused individual coaching. We do hands-on work with specific notated feedback in each session. Our goal is to bring you to the point at which you are ready to write the outline for your pilot episode.
Part I – What's it all about? We clarify your premise and the world of your pilot.
Part II – Who's there?
- A – We focus on your development of the Central Character.
- B – Emphasis on the supporting characters and their relationships.
Prep Material *: Central & Supporting Character Templates
Two 60-minute sessions
Part III – The Story. We take your character development to the next level into stories.
Two 60-minute sessions
Part IV – The Pilot. We break the story for your Pilot Episode.
XTRA CREDIT – How's it going? A check-in to see how your pilot story is developing.
* Prep material tools and templates provided by Sandler Ink when you register for your consultation.
YOUR QUESTION: Is there a way I can start a little slower?
MY ANSWER: Sure, you can opt for a:
BASIC PREMISE DEVELOPMENT CONSULTATION
Your premise is the most important element in the creation of any pilot. We address and develop the elements of your pilot's premise including:
- The World of Your Show
- Character Drive
- Your Passion
We break down the elements for clarity. We explore your connection to the idea and incorporate your passion into the project. We build the elements into a commercial concept and a working premise line which you can use to guide all further development of your show. You will have the basis of an effective pitch as well.
YOUR QUESTION: After I’ve done this, can we continue?
MY ANSWER: Sure, I’ll offer you follow-up options when we complete the Basic Premise development.
PILOT SCRIPT ANALYSIS
I read your completed draft and provide you with a thorough script analysis. I advise you on rewrites for story clarity and character through-lines. I offer specific suggestions of cuts and additions. I address all format issues and offer practical adjustments. I provide you with a copy of your script with my written comments as well as go over all my notes with you verbally.
YOUR QUESTION: The fee to read and analyze script is astronomical! Why?
MY ANSWER: A) Hours of prep time are required for me to read and break down a script in order to analyze it effectively, see where the problems are and make meaningful notes to guide your rewrite. B) I hope the high cost will encourage writers to opt for the more cost-effective development consultation which I consider to be a more artistically effective process, one that produces a far better and more vital script. Bonus: If you have been through the development process with me where we have addressed structure issues early on, I then read your drafts at a much reduced rate.
YOUR NEXT Q: But I’ve already written the pilot script, is there any way to get feedback from you for less than that exorbitant fee?
MY A: Yes! Almost all script problems are in the story structure, not so much in the dialogue, so you can opt for a:
STORY ANALYSIS CONSULTATION
If you have already written a draft of your pilot episode, a Story Analysis Consultation is a productive, cost-effective alternative to a Script Analysis Consultation.
Part I – You are provided with a comprehensive Prep Questionnaire which examines the story structure and character through-line of your pilot episode. I read and make notes on this material. Then we discuss the story issues in a one-on-one consultation with notated feedback and specific suggestions for story structure improvements.
Part II – You provide a rewrite of your story based on the previous session's notes and I review those revisions with notated feedback and specific suggestions.
Two 60-minute sessions + PLUS a 30 minute follow-up for review of your revisions and provide suggestions for your Next Steps.
Here's another option:
If you think your pilot needs an overhaul, you can treat your current script as development research on your characters and work on the re-development of your pilot with a BASIC PREMISE CONSULT or a PILOT DEVELOPMENT PACKAGE. After you go through the development process, you might discover a new (and more effective) pilot story and you’ll want to re-write your pilot script. If we have been through the development process together, I will then read that completed draft at a much reduced rate.
Sessions are held via WebEx online video conferencing. You can be anywhere in the world. All you need is a computer and a broadband connection.
NOTE: WebEx sessions are recorded and, after each session, you are provided with a download which you can save and review at your convenience.
Consultations are between 2:00PM and 7:00PM Pacific Time. Extended hours can be arranged to accommodate specific conflicts or time-zone considerations.
Sessions can be re-scheduled without penalty with 24 hour notice.
Confidentiality guaranteed. Ellen will never discuss your material or work with any other individuals or companies.